Sunday, August 28, 2016

One year as his sister
















8 comments:

  1. This was very good. Love this series.

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  2. A very captivating story by any standards!

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  3. Excellent, great story telling :)

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  4. I love this story, it had a great plot. I would have liked to see a few events like prom and graduation, but otherwise the events were great. Only issue I had was the ending seemed a little different. At one point his mother was so supportive of how far he went for his sister. It would be cool if there was an alternate ending to see where his mother is happy with the changes and maybe they found a way to fix his sister to make her happy in his body.

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    1. I agree with you about the mother's desire for them to changing back, it felt slightly weird that she was so focused on having Rachel and josh switching back that the one caption where josh was fixing the car seems a little weird that she'd do a 180.

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  5. LOL ending, very good series & well chosenpics. I like his slow adeption.

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  6. Wow - great story! I love how you ended it.

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    Zapper

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  7. Love the story thought that the progression of Josh's mental image of himself changed quite well for the story and loved that he fell in love with a guy that he knows so well. It be kinda cool to see more caption series like this with the witch with slightly different endings and maybe more characters in the caps.

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